andThese are just scales over a backing track. You have some sort of "feeling" and emotion, but it shows very very shyly in this piece.
You're always playing the same thing, basically. Experiment a bit. Get some accidentals in there (but not randomly, you have to feel them, obviously, and play accordingly).
Don't go for isolated bends, integrate them in a phrase.
Don't go for hammer ons and pull offs at such low speed.
Integrate arpeggios into the solo, no need for fast stuff you can't do it.
I have mixed feelings about the comments and the reason they where given. First feeling was, ok he's is trying to get himself noticed. Second one was, mhh schoolish way of thinking, despite the accidental and expiremental remarks.In essence, you have practice your phrasing. HARD.
Strangest thing is that when I would have gotten these comments over here or f.i. on JSguitar forum it would be perfectly fine to me. On Youtube however, a environment I like less and less because of all the selfpromotion going on and the friendship requests from all kinda unrelated entities.
I can handle comments critique etc very well, but I can't handle the thought of comments for comments sake.
Am I wrong ?
BTW I dont agree with him, What I played was what I heard in my mind while listening to the bt the first time, The melody was mend to be simple en my phrasing. .. yeah....well it's me