Wheres My Keys V.2

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ratfinkdan
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Wheres My Keys V.2

Post by ratfinkdan » Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:12 pm

Hey Guys, so I posted my take on the old Chicago blues classic key to the hyway a while back. It was ok but just wasn't quite happy with it, so went back and re did it, I think its much improved now. So hope you like it! Thanks . Dan

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Re: Wheres My Keys V.2

Post by VikingBlues » Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:21 am

Nicely done Dan. :clap: :thumbsup:

I just had a look back to your first version (November) and I think you have improved it - the lead line seems stronger and stands out a bit better. Don't ask me why I think that - I know too little about the why questions of music!

I'm impressed again as to how bluesy you can make a recording sound with such clean tones. :bb:
An improv a day keeps the demons at bay!

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Re: Wheres My Keys V.2

Post by ratfinkdan » Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:29 pm

Thanks VB, I think the first version was a little busy in some ways, I think my phrasing was better in v2, I smoothed out the rhythm a bit also. Again thanks! Dan

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Re: Wheres My Keys V.2

Post by MichaelRobinson » Mon Mar 18, 2013 4:54 pm

Well performed. I have never heard V1 so I can't tell enything about progress. :chicken:

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